Worst Cover Letter?

Got rejected in two days from x bank with this cover letter. Are there any glaring problems?

[My details]

[Address]

September 24^th, 2020

Dear Sir/Madam,

For 9-weeks this summer, your team may benefit from my work as a capital markets intern. There will be no friction within the team and no deterioration in results as, for the reasons below, my transition into the culture of X bank will be smooth.

Highly Motivated

I want to play a role in allowing innovators to pursue their ideas. Innovation is at the heart of our economy, it’s the driving force that has given society so much since the industrial revolution. Therefore, I am motivated to join X ’s Financial Solutions team and be a part of the process that drives innovation. It is deals like the one between X and Y to set Qatar’s largest solar photovoltaic power project, deals that can bring about change through innovation.

Ambitious and Hard Working

When it comes to what I am passionate about, I seek out relevant opportunities to learn more. For example, I took my eagerness to learn about how to innovate further, joining the Enterprise course at my university. 30 students and I developed 5 different start-ups; an interesting learning experience which taught me a lot about how business works. The entrepreneurial culture at X is something I am very much looking forward to.

Innovative thinker

Finding new, creative solutions to difficult problems is something I have done this summer. As a part of my scholarship, I had to propose my own research question and spend 6-weeks researching this question. Throughout this process I had to find solutions via innovative routes. For example, I had to imagine what certain government responses might be and why such responses might be effective.

Excellent communication skills

Whether it be organising finance for a company, scanning documents for errors or judging risk, if you cannot communicate your findings, the valuable knowledge you have learnt cannot be shared. Whilst working for start-up Z, I delivered presentations to other founders and tech-workers in places like Shoreditch, London. It was vital I learnt how to communicate in a concise and clear manner, to ensure my presentations retained attention by being entertaining and interesting.

Team Spirit

When undergoing hard tasks, a good, positive team can make all the difference. I am excited to join X ’s small, ambitious and tight-knit network not only to learn lessons from such big deals as the Saudi Aramco IPO, but to bring enthusiasm and hopefully make a difference, too. When we were tired and struggling on the hills in Wales on our DofE Gold expedition, it was team spirit that kept us moving. Patience with each other and positivity pushed us forward and was a key reason why we were successful.

I am excited to hear back from your investment team at X .

Yours Faithfully,

Chimp

Edit: I think i've seen the error in my ways, thanks for the mirror