Critique My CV For Spring Weeks 2024 As A First Year Student (Improved from Original CV)

So... I improved my CV from the last time I posted, it honestly looks better and is way more complete and accurate. 
As a quick refresher, Im starting Uni this september at a T5 target in the UK. I want to secure a spring week internship, so im doing this.
Also, some internship positions already opened applications, should I apply now, or should i wait to start uni and join some socities? i.e Blackrock opened the spring internship 2024 apps the 1st of July, although it is targeted for first year students.

 

If you're going to use your 3-letter months, then use that and don't interchange.
Sort the hyphen/indent for your university dates, and the gaps after certificate line (remove the LinkedIn bit).
You have full-stops at the end of some experiences and other's don't - best to remove it for all
In general, the lines/indenting isn't consistent - should take <5min so I'd adjust it

 

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